Flash Friday Fiction: Undercurrents

Picture of an old woman and a bicycle.
Old Woman. CC2.0 photo by Giorgio Grande.

Undercurrents (210 words)

Every day, she stopped at the beach.

It’d been a long time since she’d taken off her shoes and stockings to walk across the sand. A long time since she’d dipped her toes in the freezing waters, felt the rocks underneath her heels, the salt spray across her face. Forever since she’d let the sound of the surf lull her into thinking life could be smooth, easy, as predictable as the tides.

But every day, she stopped.

She watched children scampering across the dunes, their exuberance bringing smiles to all around them. She watched older ladies sunning themselves, their hats and sunglasses vain attempts to protect youth long since gone.

And she watched lovers, strolling hand in hand across the ocean’s edge, reveling in the lapping of the waves over their feet as they clung to each other, certain nothing could be better than this.

She’d been that once. A lover. Young. Beautiful. No cares in the world.

Until the day he drowned. Not her lover. Their son.

She’d only looked away for a moment, but a moment was all it had taken.

Now every morning, she paid homage to atone for her sin, attempting to cleanse herself from the unbearable grief.

She never could.

But every day, she stopped.

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This week, we had to focus on setting in our short (short!) stories of 200 (+/-10) words, and the setting given to us was BEACH. I’d love to know what you think of my offering. And please swim on over to Flash Friday Fiction to read and comment on the many other wondering stories – or submit one of your own!

Flash Fiction Friday: A Life in Miniature

Coliseum in Rome. CC2.0 photo by Vlad.
Coliseum in Rome. CC2.0 photo by Vlad

A Life in Miniature – 208 words

It was an accident, I swear. I didn’t mean to break it, the Coliseum, but, well, you know–I’m clumsy. The boss is always saying so.

Was it my fault they hadn’t secured that skeleton well enough? Or that I tripped over an extension cord and knocked down the entire Powhatan wigwam?

They’d docked my wages for months after that one.

It’s OK, though. I love this job. Where else could I see places I’ll never really see, experience things I’ll never have a chance to, even if only in 1:32 scale?

The people are amazing here. The languages I hear, the excitement on faces, the running, the shouting. The engagement. Families, couples, children–they all engage with each other, engage with the exhibits. They are so alive. Even the wailing babies don’t bother me.

Better than the silence I face each night at home.

I wonder what their lives are like, these people who don’t notice me. I pick up their trash, chase after their leavings. I ensure their visit is clean. Sparkly. Fresh.

There is no dirt here. There is no seamy underbelly in a museum, just the pictures we want to see, the ideas we want to hold true.

There’s just me. Living an invisible life.

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Woo hoo! It’s another round of Flash Friday Fiction, but we’ve got new requirements: not only did we have to focus on a character (this week, a janitor), but we also had more words in which to do so, 200 (+/- 10), in fact.

What do you think of my offering? I hope you’ll head on over to Flash Friday and read/comment on the other stories. There’s some amazing story telling (in miniature) happening over there every week!

Flash Friday Fiction: Ignoring the Call

Jeanne d’Arc, 1876. Painting by Eugène Thirion. Public Domain.
Jeanne d’Arc, 1876. Painting by Eugène Thirion. Public Domain.


Ignoring The Call

“Hark, go ye east! There ye shall find a man of the name Bob, and embark upon a dinner date, and later possibly some smooching…”

Joan took in the bizarrely dressed – but admittedly foxy – fellow hanging over her shoulders. He wore a gaudy green sheet with ludicrously large wings attached to it, and held a sword – a sword, for Pete’s sake.

This was the strangest circus she’d ever seen. Dudes cosplaying as trumpet-blowing knights. Angel wannabes suggesting hook-ups. Where were the acrobats? The clowns?

“I haven’t even finished my cotton candy!”

“This is thy last chance. Thy eHarmony membership doth expired yesterday,” whispered the flying Adonis.

“Does he look anything like you?”

“Doth anyone in real life?”

Joan sighed, her shoulders slumping.

“No thanks,” she said. “I don’t wanna miss something important.”

The angel rolled his eyes.

“Like thy soul mate?” he muttered as he flew off. “And women say men never listen.”

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Flash Friday Fiction: If The Fates Allow

Edmonton Chinese New Year. CC photo by IQRemix.
Edmonton Chinese New Year. CC photo by IQRemix.

If The Fates Allow

Margaret Locke (margaretlocke.com or @Margaret_Locke)
160 words

Furby gone bad, they called me. I don’t blame them. I mean, look at me. Weird fringe all over, who-knows-what-they-are balls for a nose, and this sparkly purple tail hanging low.

I’m no dragon. I’m a travesty.

And I love it. Because the girl decorated me herself, her delicate fingers placing each bit of fluff and ornamentation.

“Isn’t he boo-ti-fow, mama?”

The mother had nodded, her sad eyes betraying the smile on her face.

“I’m gonna wave him in da parade! And this one on da uver hand!”

“And the third?” the father’d said, chuckling.

“On my head!”

If only.

I hadn’t seen her after that. Something about white blood cell counts and immune systems and grandparents flying in.

The father abandoned us here today. “Keeping a promise,” he’d whispered. “She didn’t make it. But you did. You’re here.”

My mouth falls open.

How could he leave me, too? Life isn’t supposed to be like this.

Is it?

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Flash Friday Fiction: Clause and Effect

Wanted: Santa Claus. CC artwork by Kevin Dooley.
Wanted: Santa Claus. CC artwork by Kevin Dooley.

 

Clause and Effect – 158 words

I had to do it.

I mean, have you seen all the press that stupid Elf on the Shelf has been getting lately? Cavorting with Barbies, snorting powdered sugar, pooping on cookies?

He lands Barbie and I’m stuck with ol’ Mrs. Claus? Come on.

Seriously, it’s as if people have forgotten I’m the reason for the Season.

Er, well, you get my drift.

I didn’t think anyone’d notice. People leave me cookies all the time. What’s the big deal about sampling a wee bit early? A man’s gotta drown his sorrows somehow.

Who knew she’d turn me in for taking a bite? Just one bite. OK, so it was out of fourteen cookies. Perhaps I should have stuck with two. But quality control, I tell you.

Now here I am, locked up. Until the 24th, at least. Because no matter what fame that idiot Elf claims, I’m still Big Man on Campus come the 25th.

Take that, Elf.

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Hee hee hee. I couldn’t resist, especially after a friend told me a mysterious someone had taken one bite each out of fourteen of the Christmas cookies she had just baked. She blamed her child, but I maintain it could have been Santa himself.

Jingle your way on over to Flash Friday Fiction to read the other offerings and perhaps leave a comment or two – or craft a quick little tale of your own!