Flash Friday Fiction: 1001 Nights

Sinbad the Sailor. Illustration by Frances Brundage, published 1898 in The Arabian Nights, edited by George Fyler Townsend.
Sinbad the Sailor. Illustration by Frances Brundage, published 1898 in The Arabian Nights, edited by George Fyler Townsend.

1001 Nights – 250 words

She wanted a magic lamp with a genie. Not the Robin Williams, in-your-face kind of genie; big, loud guys weren’t her type, though she dealt with her fair share. No, she wanted the I Dream of Jeannie genie, but a male version, of course. In an outfit like cartoon Aladdin wore, only he – and his six-pack – would be real.

Where was her rags-to-riches story? Her Prince Charming? Her Richard Gere?

Life on the streets was no Hollywood movie, for sure.

She shoved the mass of bleached-blonde hair out of her eyes and sighed. A glimpse in the mirror told her yesterday’s make-up was today’s clown mask. A clown. That’s what she was. A gross distortion of the little princess she’d once been, back when she had a home. A family.

She’d thrown it all away like a farmer emptying slops, spreading venom and hatred far and wide, encasing her parents in chunks of anger, denial, rebellion, fear.

This was no fairy tale. This was Good Girl Gone Bad, the privileged reduced to the prostitute, desperation oozing out of every pore along with cigarette smoke.

The light from the bulb in the ceiling sputtered and went out.

She closed her eyes. She should go out, too. Out with a bang, or with a whimper. It wouldn’t matter. Just out.

She rubbed her belly. It kicked in response. She was out of options. Out of wishes.

One thousand and one nights of hell.

She picked up the phone.

“Hello, mom?”


As you might have guessed from the picture and the title of my story, this week’s novel inspiration is The Arabian Nights, a collection of ancient Middle Eastern folktales. Among the more famous of these stories are Sinbad the Sailor, Scheherazade, Aladdin, and Ali Baba and the Forty Thieves.

Our challenge was to craft a story of exactly 250 words using 2 of the following story elements (picture was an option prompt, and not one I used).

* Conflict: varies; often man vs man or man vs self
Character (choose one): street urchin, adventuring sailor, girl unaware of her true heritage
Theme(s) (choose one): Rags to riches, justice, forgiveness
Setting: ancient Persia

I chose street urchin (of a sort) and man vs. self. What do you think? Wanna read other contributions? Grab that magic carpet and head on over to Flash Friday Fiction.

 

Flash Friday Fiction: Ignorance Is Strength

Riot Police. CC2.0 photo by Thomas Hawk.
Riot Police. CC2.0 photo by Thomas Hawk.

Ignorance is Strength – 215 words

“Persistence is futile,” you say.

I laugh. You always get it wrong. “That’s not how it—“

“Persistence is futile,” you interrupt, brows furrowing as your mouth turns down.

I go back to scrubbing the pan. No sense arguing.

“Big Mother is watching,” you say.

I heave a sigh. “Brother. It’s Brother.”

“I’ve got my thigh on you.”

Now I know you have to be kidding. But my guffaws are met with stony silence, your black eyes beading into mine.

I raise up my red, raw hands in surrender.

You nod, and return to cleaning the counters.

I look out the window, watching them march by, all black and white and shouting orders.

A small boy darts out in the middle of them, laughing as his panicked mother lunges after.

They tread on him with no second thoughts, and soon red joins the monochrome color scheme.

I want to cry out, but noise brings notice, and that’s the last thing we want.

I look back at you. You watch me with a steady gaze, a slight nod indicating you, too, saw the horror that just occurred. One of many. An average day.

We duck our heads. Focus on our work.

“Live long and whisper,” you say.

Prosper, my mind corrects, but I don’t bother saying it.


Here were this week’s rules for Flash Friday Fiction:

Using George Orwell’s 1984 (in which a historian secretly rebels against the oppressive government he works for) as novel inspiration, craft a story of 200-225 words, using two of the following story elements:

* Conflict: man vs society (government)
Character: historian
Theme(s): Censorship and/or totalitarianism
Setting: dystopia (near-future society ruled by an evil, oppressive government)

I chose everything except the historian. What do you think of my mini-tale? I’d love to hear from you in the comments! And if you march on over to Flash Friday Fiction, you may read the other weekly offerings, or perhaps contribute your own.

Flash Friday Fiction: Charles and the Charcoal Factory

Chemical Factory. CC2.0 photo by Astrid Westvang.
Chemical Factory. CC2.0 photo by Astrid Westvang.

Charles and the Charcoal Factory -135 words

The factory killed his dad. Bled him dry, ma said, with its eternal grayness and dark center.

Charles hated that factory, smokestacks burning up dreams day after day as workers labored to provide for their families.

Provide what? They never had turkey at Thanksgiving, ham at Easter. “Too expensive,” ma said.

The foreman claimed it was an accident, that his da misstepped on a ladder.

Charles knew better.

For weeks, he’d hurled rocks at it, that soul-sucking edifice. His anger and rage only grew, hungry and black.

Yesterday, he’d given up. Given in. He’d picked up da’s backpack, ready to take his place.

But he’d also taken purple paint and drawn lilies on the factory’s face. It warmed his soul, this act of treason.

He’ll kill them with color and beauty. He’d kill them all.


This week, we got 100-150 words in which to craft a short (short!) story based in some way on Roald Dahl’s Charlie and the Chocolate FactoryWe got this summary of the novel:

Story elements (base your story on any TWO of these; be sure to tell us which two you chose: NOTE: for copyright’s sake, please make sure the elements are original to you — i.e. do not use Dahl’s copyrighted characters/world):

* Plot: A poor boy along with four other children win a day in a magical chocolate factory; unbeknownst to them, the factory owner is testing the children for an even bigger prize.
* Conflict: man vs man (the children compete against each other) OR man v self(each child undergoes a trial related to her/his greatest flaw)
Character: poor boy
Theme(s): You reap what you sow
Setting: a run-down shack at the edge of a great city OR a world-famous candy factory

I chose these elements: Character (Poor boy), Theme (You reap what you sow). What do you think? Want to read stories from seriously talented authors, or perhaps contribute your own? Head on over to Flash Friday Fiction – we welcome you with open arms (and always appreciate a supportive comment or two . . .).

Flash Friday Fiction: Reality Bites

Château d'If, Marseille vu de la navette des Iles d'Or.  CC2.0 photo by Jacqueline Poggi.
Château d’If, Marseille vu de la navette des Iles d’Or.

Reality Bites

I wish I were anywhere but in this car today. We’re hurtling through the air at eighty miles an hour, and yet all I feel is trapped, like a wrongfully imprisoned convict, cornered between the exhaustedly grumpy husband, the irritable, scowling teen, and the too-exuberant-for-this-small-space little girl.

There’s no justice in this. Why should I be confined to this tiny front seat, when all I long to be is free, perhaps strolling the streets of London, gallivanting along the coast of France, or at least catching up with social media and trying to convince people to buy my book?

The husband sighs as yet another vehicle cuts him off in the left lane. It’s like modern-day jousting, this testosterone-fueled road rage, man vs man in the quest to get there just a little bit faster.

I focus only on this phone, on this story, willing myself to write in the middle of us zig-zagging lanes, willing my bladder not to empty itself right here, right now. That would only make everything and everybody that much more uncomfortable.

I know I’m supposed to be crafting fiction, a miniature classic in the vein of The Count of Monte Cristo. Too bad. This is what you get – a truth more frightening than any fancy tale: the dreaded summer family vacation.


 

So our fearless Flash Friday leader, Rebekah Postupak, changed up Flash Friday this week, adding in twists to spice things up. Here are the new “rules,” as quoted directly from the Flash Friday website:

* Novel Prompt: We will provide the name of a famous novel along with a summary of its story elements. If you aren’t familiar with the novel, no worries — our summary’s all you need.
* New word count: ROTATING. Each week will require a different min/max wordcount.
* Your challenge: YOU CHOOSE which two story elements to build your story on, and let us know which two you chose.
* Optional photo: for those who prefer photo inspiration, we’ll still include one, but it will becompletely optional to use it for your story. The only prompt you’re required to use = TWO story elements from that week’s novel.

Those are the general new guidelines. Here are the ones specific to this week:

This week’s novel: The Count of Monte Cristoby Alexandre Dumas.

Story elements (base your story on any TWO of these; be sure to tell us which two you chose):

* Plot: A clever, now fabulously wealthy man seeks revenge on those who once wrongfully imprisoned him.
* Conflict: man vs man
Character: escaped convict
Theme(s): revenge AND/OR justice
Setting: Napoleonic France

Not only did I have to craft my tale in accordance with these new guidelines, but I had to do so while traveling in the car. So, well, I did the best I could, taking reality and turning it into fiction. Or not. My story ended up being @ 232 words (counting by hand while on the interstate, so hey, I could be wrong.)

Elements: most of them. Man vs man, (not so) escaped convict, France, justice, etc.

What do you think? My take is it was better than not contributing anything at all!

Guest Author Interview: Emily June Street

EJSWoo hoo! Strap yourselves in, ladies and gents, because you’re going on a ride today as we get to know Emily June Street, author of the new epic fantasy The Gantean. I know Emily from her flash fiction from the weekly Flash Friday Fiction contest, so I know the superb quality of her prose. I’m not normally an epic fantasy reader, but you can bet I’ll be delving into The Gantean when it releases Saturday (but you can pre-order it right now)!

Give us a three-sentence summary of The Gantean.

After she is violently kidnapped from her stark existence on the cold island of Gante, Leila must learn to survive in a southern culture that her native people hate. In the south, exotic temptations greet her at every turn: rich flavors, profligate magic, and dangerous love with a forbidden man. As a civil war threatens, Leila has to choose between southern love and northern rituals—but at what price?

GanteanCoverWhere did the idea for The Gantean come from? How long did it take you to craft such an intricate fantasy world?

Don’t laugh, but the idea for The Gantean came to me when I was twelve, and I was told in class to write a story. I started the story with a girl on a cold northern island, watching the sea as a foreign ship crested the horizon. My character ended up being a prophesied “chosen one” in the typical fantasy narrative that I’d read so often at that time in my life—though always with heroes rather than heroines. Since then, the story has changed tremendously, of course, although I still have the original handwritten draft. I’ve rewritten the book over and over again over decades and written other books in the world, too. The world-building aspect of the story is always a work in progress, always changing depending on what different characters reveal and the needs of the story as it grows.

What authors have most influenced your own writing?

This is such a difficult question. I’m not sure how much others’ great writing can penetrate this thick skull, but I have admired many writers over the years. I’m a voracious reader, and I read widely. I do wish that I could pick up tight, smart prose by osmosis, but unfortunately, developing that skill isn’t so easy. So here are some writers I love to read, always hoping they’ll influence me, though I’m well aware that brilliance can’t really rub off just through reading: Margaret Atwood, for stark and intelligent prose; Carol Berg, for fantasy world-building and intricate plotting; Colum McCann, for building deep internal worlds for his characters; Tana French, for deft structure and timing; Toni Morrison, for economical and beautiful sentences packed with meaning. That’s an all-star team that, in my wildest dreams, would influence me. More directly, my writing partner/critique buddy Beth Deitchman influences me because she is my first reader who interacts deeply with my work. She’s great at helping my writing get clean and clear. She blends a perfect combination of creative looseness and literary rigor.

You write novels and you write flash fiction. Which do you prefer? Do you think one influences the other?

My brain thinks in novels. My ideas are big and complicated. I find flash fiction really difficult, because every idea I have feels larger than a few hundred words. I’m still trying to figure out how to narrow the focus in such short works. Also, I think I have a plain writing style, stripped down and not very poetic, which doesn’t always work, because you have to put the flash in flash fiction, right? I got into flash fiction because my critique buddy Beth Deitchman sent me a prompt from Angry Hourglass showing a beat-up bicycle. I love bicycles, and I wrote a whole novel about my love of bicycles called Velo Races, so the prompt was a natural starting point for me. I liked the challenge of being economical with my words and my story, and I recognized short writing as a good exercise, but it really is like eating my Brussels sprouts without bacon. Good for me, but not my great love. I will always be a writer of novels. That’s what I love; that’s my bacon.

You run a publishing company, Luminous Creatures Press. How does that inform your own writing? And how the heck do you find time to write, with how many other things you do?

secret roomLuminous Creatures Press began as a way for my writing partner and me to self-publish our work, together. We put out some collections of short stories as practice runs, and then I put out Velo Races, my bike novel, and a second novel called Secret Room. Beth published her novellas set in the world of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. Self-publishing is still our primary focus, but we are experimenting with avenues for publishing other authors, too, and hosting our own flash fiction contests a few times a year, the results of which we sometimes put out in book form. I do freelance editing and formatting under the umbrella of Luminous Creatures Press. Reading other peoples’ work always teaches me, and editing rougher, less polished pieces is just as educational and important as reading the great published works—it teaches me how to develop something from the ground up.

As far as time management goes, my life is organized and routine-oriented; that’s the only way I can keep all my balls in the air. My real-life, everyday profession is teaching Pilates. I run a big studio in Marin County with my husband. That takes up the vast majority of my time. I teach Pilates seven days a week, 363 days a year. Having that regular, relentless schedule actually helps me with writing, because when I do have time to write, it’s an explosion—I want to do it so badly, it just pours out. That said, my schedule is difficult—I can only get new writing done two or three days a week. I edit in the little bits of time between appointments or whenever I have a spare hour. I get up early to work, and I don’t sleep as much as I probably should. I’m not complaining—it’s good problem to have, being hungry for more time because you love everything you do so much. I’m grateful to have the privilege and the freedom to be creative.

What’s the one piece of advice you’d wished you had when you started writing?

No one ever gave me this piece of advice, but I figured it out over the course of rewriting The Gantean so many times. HAVE A PLOT PLAN, even if it’s only a few hastily sketched directives on post-it notes. Have a sense of what the story is about on its deepest level and use that to shape where the story goes.

What’s your take on the traditional vs indie discussion?

velocipederacesMy basic take on it is: do what pleases you. Experiment. Try everything. Deciding which way to go is a personal choice, and may have to do with goals for a given book or goals for personal development. My book, Velo Races, was originally self-published, but it has been picked up by Microcosm Publishing to be revised and then re-published by them. I’ve had a great time working with them to make something bigger and better than the original. The traditional route pushes me out of my comfort zone. As a time-challenged introvert, marketing is hard for me. I don’t like to spend my precious time doing it, and it isn’t a satisfying experience. I’m not someone who likes to garner attention. I’d much prefer to stay holed up, writing, but with a book being produced traditionally, I feel more pressure to put myself out there. With self-publishing, I can just do the parts that I love, writing and making books, and the marketing can flow more organically. I’m extremely glad to have some experience working both ways. It’s helped me understand my motivations for writing and helped me clarify what I want. I’ll keep going with the hybrid route, doing some self-publishing and some traditional. Spanning the two worlds suites me, perhaps because I’m a Gemini? For whatever reason, I like to work with dualities.

What’s next in your writing career? Is The Gantean a stand-alone novel, or will it continue? Perhaps a trilogy?

Hahahahahaha! A trilogy! If only! The Gantean is part of a series of seven books. All of them are drafted right now. The next book in the series, called The Cedna, is tightly connected to The Gantean, and so I consider those two books a duet within the seven-book series. Then Book Three is stand-alone, in terms of its plot. After that, things get messy. Books 4-7 are tangled in a big, complicated knot, as yet unraveled. I’m not sure how to structure them to best tell the conclusion of the story, so I’m ripping them apart and putting them back together in various ways right now. I’m hoping to release Book Two, The Cedna, later this year and Book Three sometime in 2016.

Want to connect with Emily? Find her here:

EmilyStreetemail: emily@luminouscreaturespress.com

Twitter: @EmilyJuneStreet

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/emily.street.378

WordPress: https://emilyjunestreet.wordpress.com/

Luminous Creatures Press: https://luminouscreaturespress.com/

My Amazon Book Links:

The Ganteanhttp://www.amazon.com/Gantean-Tales-Blood-Light-Book-ebook/dp/B00ZJOV0SI/

Velo Races: http://www.amazon.com/Velo-Races-Emily-June-Street/dp/1507535678/

Secret Room: http://www.amazon.com/Secret-Room-Emily-June-Street-ebook/dp/B00LUCZZIE/

Other file formats:

Velo Races: https://payhip.com/b/n54k
Secret Room: https://payhip.com/b/O2wv


Whew! What a wonderful interview – I’m so glad you took the time to join us today, Emily. We wish you the best of luck with The Gantean – and all the marvelous books to follow!